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Caladhiel
05-12-2010, 05:39 PM
It has been a long time since I've written anything, please be gentle with me :(

Shiver Into Sleep

In your arms I sleep when I close my eyes -
The long leaves of weeping willow shorn for something stronger,
A sculptor's subtle chisel dance over hewn and weathered stone,
Pliancy pushing deeper roots that bend instead of break.
On sunny days we walk instead of dream, and dream we move
In a timeless romance, under every hue of sky -
Each one compliments your smile - here is your home.
The green grass between our toes reaching to kiss the moon
As passionately as the two entwined below do.
As I shiver into sleep, I think of you.

DarkWolf
07-16-2010, 08:13 PM
This is a very nice poem with beautiful mental scenery. The alliteration is really nicely done and helps the pacing greatly.

Very nice!

ShastaWolf
12-03-2010, 04:37 PM
Great work! I love nature and werewolf romance poetry. Nice piece. :)