Meta's Poetry/ songs

[MetaKittie]

Alright, to kick this off is a little song inspired by Emilie Simon's song Desert.
(its a very mellow. slow song really)
Comments are loved! :love:

Tomorrow when the sun rises...
I will be happy...happy
Another day

Tomorrow in the moon rise
I will feel justice
Understand...
Myself

Soon I will feel right
Never be wrong
No motives
To call my own

Tomorrow a new day
Destiny unfolds
In my home

And tomorrow I will be running (running, running, running)
Forget the past
I will be happy on my own
Find my way back home
To place where I am happy...
Call it my own

Tomorrow in the sun rise...
Just forget
What is not my own
There is no home

[GoddessWolf]

I like it Meta, but when I was reading it, it felt more like a poem than a song to me. I think it was because of own and home rhyming so much throughout.

My favorite part was:

"Tomorrow in the moon rise
I will feel justice
Understand...
Myself"

:)