Gerald (somewhat gruesome)

[DarkHunter]

Decided to remove the story in the event I ever want to do something else with it. Best not to have it floating around the internet.

Thanks to everyone who enjoyed it and commented.

:beerchug:

[DarkHunter]

I assume that's your way of saying, "No one is going to understand that in the end, he's dead." :droolbld:

[UNODRAGONE]

holy fluff! :eek: I have to be honest, when I first started reading it I thought 'you wrote about some guy taking a horrible shit...ok..' but at the end, him lying in blood and shit, damn wow I'm lost for words. It's creepy but in a weird addicting way if that makes sense. It kept me reading and actually at one point got me disgusted which is hard as hell to do. Awesome job:beerchug:

[GreyWolf16]

great story!loved it,keep up the good work.

[Amy]

eeeeeewwwwv ..... I've never had anything so well written make me want to throw up before (you should probably take that as praise):notworthy: