My Poetry

[Sanctus Espiritus]

Reassurance & Longing

Your smile holds my elation
For three thousand heart beats,
And when you take me in your arms
Salvation I will greet.

Kisses never mattered,
Sex never will, too,
All I'll ever care about
Is my time spent with you.

No matter how hard they hit me
Or how many times I break,
As long as you are by my side
Forever is what I'll take.

[BlasphemousHeart]

hmm, you have an interesting flow. Short, sweet and to the point. nice job.

[Sanctus Espiritus]

hmm, you have an interesting flow. Short, sweet and to the point. nice job.

Thanks Blas. :3 I like short, to the point poems. xD If it's long it had better be interesting, you know? Anyway, got a new one.

Drinking Me Dry Isn't So Bad With Good Tunes

You're trapped within my pulse;
I'm trapped within your arms.
Both of our worlds, rocking,
Struggling to break apart this atrocity,
Yet failing with a breathtaking waste of effort.

I can feel the pain thudding in my temples,
Techno beats picking up pace;
There are lights whirling on my skin,
But you won't stop now.

Swift snapping, Lungs trapped,
You're whisking away my air.
Our bodies are so tight, close to the point,
The end-

Life faded from my eyes first.
I am trapped in your pulse,
You are grasped by the rapture
When the music never ends.

[Sanctus Espiritus]

That Thocker Girl

Crack the bat against wood,
Stone, bone, and flesh.
Mother always told me not to;
Father said, "I told you so,"
Four steps forward I will go.

I have surrendered everything
But my spite
And I know it makes you smile to see my fists clench.
How much do you love me when I hit you like this?

[UNODRAGONE]

That Thocker Girl

Crack the bat against wood,
Stone, bone, and flesh.
Mother always told me not to;
Father said, "I told you so,"Four steps forward I will go.

I have surrendered everything
But my spite
And I know it makes you smile to see my fists clench.
How much do you love me when I hit you like this?

I like certian aspects of this piece such as: "Crack the bat against wood,
Stone, bone, and flesh." and I think it has potential, but the bolded parts confused me a little bit because they did not seem to fit in with the rest??

[Sanctus Espiritus]

I like certian aspects of this piece such as: "Crack the bat against wood,
Stone, bone, and flesh." and I think it has potential, but the bolded parts confused me a little bit because they did not seem to fit in with the rest??

It was spur of the moment; I think it's rather choppy on those bits too. q: I'll have to go back and work on it sometime.

[UNODRAGONE]

It was spur of the moment; I think it's rather choppy on those bits too. q: I'll have to go back and work on it sometime.

I honestly love the start and honestly think with just a twick here and there it will be awesome :)