Dangerous Enclosure

[GoddessWolf]

This is one of my favorite poems because I tried to break away and use some different words than I normally do. I hope you all enjoy it too. :)



"Dangerous Enclosure"


Fragmented ashes,
Frozen within a soul,
Dead cells non responsive,
Coldness on patrol.
Lingering revenants,
Poised upon the rail,
Caverns twisted passage,
Enclosed architects trail.

Vision fixated,
Bound by supposition,
Myriad colors blemish,
Fallacious erring deposition.
Blossoms atrophy,
Dusky soil begrimed,
Sepulchral infused dementia,
Beckons interminable crime.

Splintered cerebrum,
Decayed momentous lore,
Combating poisoned remembrances,
Shattering the unlocked core.
Modest visionary,
Striving on unsteady ground,
Ignorance emotionally impairing,
Ruptured expressive sound.

[UNODRAGONE]

I love the inner message to this poem :)


Fragmented ashes,
Frozen within a soul,
Dead cells non responsive,
Coldness on patrol.
Lingering revenants,
Poised upon the rail,
Caverns twisted passage,
Enclosed architects trail.


this part caught me the most because I know that exact feeling and you displayed it beautifully :) the rest of the poem rolled well and fit everything together, though I must admit I did have to pull out my dictionary for most of it :o :p